INDIGO - Lukas Forman

I think that was really cool! I feel like someday this could be turned into a comic with how well drawn it is!

Exceptional artwork as well as engaging story. One suggestion is to move your title cards to the beginning of Acts.

The art in this is so well done and really helps bring this compelling story to life. I love the issues of morality and justice that Indigo grapples with, and its a joy to see the character grow as he tackles these very real world issues. The different voices you give the characters are consistent and help bring them to life. Very well done!

Wow! I think your story is amazing. A main character that overcomes their weaknesses. I like the art work and far along this story became. The audio was a but loud at some points which distracted me at some points. But other than that I think you did a great job.

Nicely done! Mythic theme, and a flawed main character that overcomes their weaknesses. Exceptional art style as well. Very much in keeping with the graphic novel subject matter. Your use of music is appropriate, although I agree with Felix that the audio levels were a little loud at some points. Again, great work.

Wow! I think your story is excellent! Classic dystopian/superhero/sci fi vibes. The only problem I had with it was the music was a little louder than the narration, which had me struggling to follow at times. But I loved your character development and storytelling, I think it had a very cinematic feeling to it. Your messaging was clearly expressed throughout the piece and I think you did an overall great job.