Act 1 of Maria, The Park's Statue

By Arianne's Team

Description: Hello, dear audience, My name is Arianne, and I'm glad to present Act 1 of Maria, the park's statue story! In Act 1, we discover the origins of the park's statue. "Once upon a time, there was a statue named Maria. The statue was sculpted in honour of Anya Maria. She was a musician who played the trumpet and was part of a large family called the Melodik. The family took a boat to move to America to escape the war in Europe. When the family arrived in the City of Jeudi, Anya Maria found a job in the honking section of the Wall's vehicle Company. The musician continued to work in this branch of the corporation well after the age of retirement. When she passed away, the vehicle Company and the City commissioned a statue as a tribute to her contribution as a car honk developer and local artist.

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Christian---
Is a great story. But it can use an exiting point (a climax). The illustrations do portray the narration
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Arianne---
Hello Christian, Thank you for your feedback. The climax is indeed missing in Act 1. That is why it will appear in the second part of the story arc in Act 2. Let me know what you think when Act 2 is uploaded.
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Sofya---
Hi, I liked how your focus is on a personal story of an actual artist. You must live her art and admire her. I wish you could tell a bit more about the art, even if the second part is entirely about it. When I was watching it I was questioning why we have to know about someone's work life, especially if they were self made artitst. You could tell more about the statue and what's interesting about it first, if you actually wanted to tell story about vehicle.
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Arianne---
Hello Sofya, Thank you for your feedback on Maria's background story. As an artist, I need a paying job to make ends meet, and the character didn't escape this aspect during her lifetime. Plus, the vehicle company will be an important element in Act 2 of the story.