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I really liked the style and the font and how you used a game to illustrate a historical event. Great job

I like that you designed a game to illustrate a historical event. I would have liked to have seen more character development though. This is a story course so I was looking for elements like wants vs needs, obstacles, and growth of the character. Perhaps include a pitfall in the middle of the game that the character has to learn something about themselves to overcome.