Heart Attacked

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Heart Attacked

By Christian's Team

Description: Characters: Acceptance (Virtue) Patience & Understanding (Virtues) The Cognitive (Function) Logic (Way. Of thinking) The Ego The super E (Moral Compass) Faith & Hope (virtues Only mentioned)

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    Skye---

    Really interesting, having a main character literally named Acceptance whose story arc IS to accept their place in someone's psyche. I wouldn't have thought of focusing on Acceptance as a super-power, both in a positive & negative light, but you're absolutely right-- people will get through things or give up based on how they "accept" things. The sort of combination of a nearly HR Giger-esque sci-fi bent to the design work with the heavily cartoonish characters on-top is very unique! I do think that it's sometimes difficult to tell all of the characters you've mentioned apart, since they don't all have VERY recognizable visual attributes. Since Acceptance is just a white blob like the rest of them, it feels like you should make more of an effort to make your main character distinct in some way.

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    Christian---

    Their uniqueness shows when they evolve.

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    Anona---

    This is such an interesting and compelling story! I did find myself having to work to keep track of all the different characters but the premise was beautiful and easy to understand. I also was blown away by the artwork. It's so well done!

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    Christian---

    Thank you I appreciate it

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    Tony---

    Super well done Christian! If had a quibble it would that the story is somewhat derivative of Inside Out, but you taken the basic idea and made it yours. Nice work all around -- art, narration, character arc, moral.

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    Christian---

    Thank you so much