Roxy

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Roxy

By JeMi

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    Felix---

    I love the idea and the morals, as it is something I believe too many young girls struggle with. Personally, I would've liked to see the visuals vertical facing, but I understand that it is not always possible. This story feels like its level of completion is at story-spine level, and I would've liked to see a bit more of an explanation about the closet technology. But I really appreciated your effort, audio, and ideas. I think you can reach a lot of people with this story. Keep up the good work! :)