Final Edited Video

Avocado goes on a great journey. The drawings were simple but super effective.

I like the concept of your story: cute, funny, with a Dreamworks movie kinda vibe. The visuals spoiled the audio story for some parts, as the didn't really sync. It caused me to know what happened ahead of time. Additionally, I believe the hilarious and adorable character of Avocado could be expanded on a little further in this story. I understand he is a normal cat, but what kind of development does he go through in the course of the story? Overall, I really enjoyed the quirky, funny bits. I love the casual narration "Crushed up lemons," "He ate food just like other cats,"