TOGETHER

I love how Oak is a good family man and a leader who leads them into a better land because of a clear dream.

I like how you explain the world with a kind of prologue where the narrator tells how this world works. Maybe you could also tell it using visuals? For example: Maybe an incident happens and then you see how the tree moves, then you don't have to explain it to the audience but they experience it because they see it happen. I think you have a creative vision of world building and you told a cool story. Well done!

I love it; this character reminds me of me whenever I wake up from awesome and inspiring dreams that I end up turning into my creation. I even got the lava monster and water monster idea for my Ifrit-Pilot story from a dream and it was one of the coolest dreams I've ever had. You have quite an imagination when it comes to storytelling.