Grounded - A Short Film by Austin P

I'm enjoying Kite, the penguin story. He has a dream of flying and wonderful friends who support him, even in the face of his community's disbelief. The visual narrative and music choices are well-suited to this story about making impossible dreams come to life.

I like how your character's arc, dreams and personality is very well developped, even with no dialogues. The story is easy to follow through the emotions and the pictures of your story. On the main character reaches his goal, the audiance feels for him as we've been with him through every challenges he went through. You were also very thoughtful for details, thinking through the different angles you pick, like when he spraypaints the plane, or when he pulls the place out of the cave - you can read determination and hardwork with an original angle. Overall, great work ! I can see you efforts through your work. I can see the hours you spent on it, so congrats !

Woooow! This is a very professional and captivating piece of work! A wonderful story with very expressive characters! The contrast between the black-and-white reality and the colorful dreams is used brilliantly. I’m giving a standing ovation!

This story is truly beautiful; the character’s relentless drive to pursue his dream, regardless of the obstacles, the judgments of others, or the risks involved, ignites a sense of hope and determination in the reader. His unwavering commitment serves as a powerful reminder that courage and perseverance can lead to extraordinary achievements.

What I loved most was...everything! I hope to see more Kite stories in the future!