Ball Had It All

What a special and fascinating story, Lesley! I loved your genius to get so much use and juice out of a soccer ball, congratulations! You speak of friendship and highlight the value of teamwork versus rivalry or competitiveness. There is no doubt that from your story we can extract important values that resonate with the audience. A story with simple drawings and complex background... Bravo! ;)

It was interesting to see the captions/narration/text, it is fun and flashy, so it was an interesting insertion compared to the other versions, and it definitely helps the viewer to really know what is happening in the sequences. The message is very important.

Oh man. That description alone is so smart. What a tagline. Practically poetry. You've got some great bones of a story here. I'm so glad you exhibited this. The narration and tone is brilliant. I want to see this as a fully animated film so bad. Keep going!. This is hilarious! Thank you so much for your hard work.