Catfish

By Mikenah

Description: Follow Chuck on his journey of helping a man escape a group of evil turtles that lurk in the deep. Will he succeed? Watch and find out.

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Nadia---
like the plot of the story and the character you chose to draw. Love the story!
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Tracy---
The arrows showing the directionality of the fish were a nice touch. The catfish saving the man and them becoming friends reminded me of "The Incredible Mr. Limpet." Great work!
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Lexi---
I loved the voice you chose for Chuck — it fit the character really well and gave him a lot of personality! The sound effects were also really well chosen and helped make the story feel more exciting and immersive. The only suggestion I would give is to balance the volume of the sound effects a little more, since some were much louder than others. I was also a little unsure about how Chuck escaped from the turtles, so adding a bit more clarity there could help the story flow even better. Overall though, this was really creative and fun to watch. Great job!
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Sai Kalyan Chakravarthy---
The explanation of the story without any voice narration is really good. A slight improvement of the ending is needed. It felt like the story suddenly ended. But overall it’s really good.
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Tara---
Great transitions and sound effects and artwork. It gives that folk art style. Very great work!!