Sweet Orange & Genie

I really like the concept of the orange, I think it's a really good story overall. You could maybe try to improve the audio clarity, but overall it's a very great story.

This is a cute story. I love it when stories personify objects and make them relatable. I also appreciated the consistency of how everything was illustrated, with the genie and the orange having a consistent look throughout. I found it a little difficult to hear the narration, so maybe slow down your pace when speaking to help bring this to the next level. A question that I had was: why was the orange so interested in sports space? Out of all their ideas, what made Orange choose that particular wish to become reality?

This is a cute concept and I like that you thought outside the box for your story. Some things that could be worked on is having more conflict in the story. How did they get to know one another? Did Orange only have one wish? What about Orange and their interactions made the genie decide to help him? How did Orange survive in Sports Space and was Orange lonely? Why was Sports Space his only want and what need did going there fulfill? What did Orange learn from this? With regards to the video, you might want to consider slowing down your voice over so you are more understandable or add subtitles. I really think this story has potential and with some more work it could be something very interesting.

The audio is too fast and not so clear. I love the idea, though, and the drawings are cool!