Frost-creamʻs Final

The sound effect you used was eerie! I'm not sure if the main character is the villain or hero, but they are clearly hurt. I like that you included little clues. The words "It's all my fault" being added seemed intentional, but I was unclear of its context. I think some dialogue or a transcript could help make this a little clearer. It was intriguing, and I look forward to finding out if I should be rooting for the blue sad character or not!

I think that your character design is very good. The character feels menacing because of the jagged lines and coloring. I got lost in the story after the training part. I don't really know what happened and would like to understand it better. Did you intend for there to be a sound track? The sound causes tension but I am not sure it helps the Story. I'd like to know more about what the character wants to fight about.