Actual Final

I really enjoyed this! You did a good job telling the story of someone who is technically ostracized, but uses their outsider status to affect change around them. The artwork depicted what was happening in the story beautifully and helped me as I followed along. Great job!

I really like the story, but it would be nice to get slightly more detail on him learning empathy if we ever get a future rendition of this project. For example if when he first takes refuges he accidentally mistreats them because he simply just doesn't think about how he needs to help them with their basic needs to and not just focus on himself, but through a few incidents he learns better and grows his empathy to become a better caretaker. It's a great story, I just wish you had a bit more time so you could add more detail and make the quality closer to what you wanted.